佐天任工 发表于 2022-2-11 11:36   全显示 1楼
作者对人妻的描写非常细致，读起来代入感很强。铁军这种欲擒故纵的方式设计人妻在我意料之外，本来读完第四章以为会顺着地铁猥亵的方式让妻子就范。建议作者也许可以把小武或者新增一个小弟的角色作为妻子学校的学生，里应外合一起拿下妻子。这样的好处是也可以扩展后续内容的场景，比方在学校羞辱玩弄。
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