[禁忌之恋] 【品味母亲】

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1楼大中小发表于 2009-10-1 08:24 显示全部帖子

这是一篇好文章，很细腻的描写，特别是与妈妈作爱前的过程描写，突出了主题品味，从脚开始，用嘴品味了妈妈。还有就是心理描写的很少，妈妈从被动到默认，再从默认到主动这长线没有写出来，如果再写出自己以后与妈妈的性福生活，来几段与爸爸争风吃醋的细节和与妈妈偷情的，那就出彩了

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