该用户匿名发帖 发表于 2009-9-17 08:57 只看TA 133楼 |
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it's good story but I cannot believe that everything happened in a day. It seems to me a bit too fast even for a mature woman. If the last 3 or 4 sections of the story can be divided into multiple days, it will make the story more real. Thanks. |
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kuangfeng02 发表于 2009-9-17 23:55 只看TA 135楼 |
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妈的 我做了几年家教咋都没喷到这些好事呢 郁闷 |
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